Creative writing from the Conscious I- thoughts, reflections and ideas expressed in urban literature, Caribbean-themed prose and poetry.
it's a very romantic 1.. make me feel like a real woman in love, like i want to be touched! in that same way
Beautiful!! ... love the description of how she stole his thoughts and left him breathless...I like the ending better without the last line, though. Adds a bit of mystery...like dat :)~nik
@JamaicaRocker GOOD! u checked in on us again...Thanks.@Sarah.... watch out,now! lol Keep reading. @the Nik.. you may be right. I might need you as my editor. Thanks for your input. I'll take this into consideration when I put it in the book (where I include two more verses)Bless upKaya
Please, convey your thoughts...CHAT YUH MIND! TALK HOW YUH FEEL!